More Cuts

Yesterday I aint really do too much except work on my story all day. I finished both of my stories but then i had to go through a whole bunch of different edits. I found out that my story could only be 500 words max but mine was more like 800 words or more. SO then I had to figure out a way to shrink it down. This was really giving me a headache because I had to sit here hour after hour thinking of different ways to shorten my sentences. I had to cut words out and it seemed like the more words cut the more words I had to add. So then I asked like 3 or 4 different to help with my story. Then Kory help me trim it down to 622. I felt that was as much as i can do because if I took any more words out or deleted any quotes then it would take away the feeling I had for my story. I guess sometime in the journalism that's what happens. I don't mind that but when I write a lot it's always better then a little bit because you can never have to much information, you just can't afford not to have enough. Hopefully today will be better then yesterday.